Kickstarting this blog!
I really wanted to start up my blog for a loooooong time...
and now i kickstart my new blog "V.CoL" with this poem written by me.
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THE TREE
I Stand, stand tall in the middle of a ground,
For no other trees appear around.
For I am the only one left alone,
As all the trusted trees have gone,
I stand, stubborn, stubborn like a rock,
The harsh winds pass me and I block.
Hoping that I last for some more days…
Before the humans run on me
THEIR BLOODY BLADES
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8 comments:
All the trusted trees have gone
Referring to frnds who betrayed u or wat?
u should write more poems shiv
Cheers
Tee
this is just a personification of tree...
not me
hey shiva the poem or better to stay literature is quite good and saying about trusted trees have gone. this is one of the biggest truth of life the one you believe on are the one that betrays you and blades may be you are refering to the hollowness in relationship and hypocrisy thats all around...i have an suggestion if you could provide a little summary in easy words i think it would be great.... but really good work done and i appreciate all your efforts will return back.....
Excellentt poem.
I really love it.
strong words..sound like quite the activist thr! :)
aha, an environmentalist!! the world needs one badly..
Nice one.
I am glad to meet a fellow poet :)
LB!!!!!!!!! Poetry!!!!!! OMFG!!!! I never knew you have even attempted this ever! lol. Good I found it! I liked it. Very nice attempt. You should definitely write more poems :) Way to go LB!!! mwahssss!
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